I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Kasa, Nice to see you blogging. Well done. You brainstorming of ideas on slide 4 is very detailed. Just remember to proofread your sentences so they sound right. For example- Mana Voutier is a space traveller not space travel. Interesting findings on slide 6 you've got from information you have found. Great work. Keep it up Kasa.
Hi Vakasa. How are you doing in lock down again. I hope you and your family and happy and safe. I also liked your ideas on slide 4. We certainly do need to stop all our pollution. Earth is our home so we need to stop being litter bugs. Imagine if we didn't use a rubbish bin, EVER, at home or at school. Yuck. We would have to climb over all the rubbish. Hopefully we can all start to use more bins and be tidy kiwi's. Keep working hard Vakasa. See you soon. Keep smiling:) Bronca
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Kia ora Kasa,
ReplyDeleteNice to see you blogging. Well done. You brainstorming of ideas on slide 4 is very detailed. Just remember to proofread your sentences so they sound right. For example- Mana Voutier is a space traveller not space travel.
Interesting findings on slide 6 you've got from information you have found. Great work. Keep it up Kasa.
Hi Vakasa. How are you doing in lock down again. I hope you and your family and happy and safe. I also liked your ideas on slide 4. We certainly do need to stop all our pollution. Earth is our home so we need to stop being litter bugs. Imagine if we didn't use a rubbish bin, EVER, at home or at school. Yuck. We would have to climb over all the rubbish. Hopefully we can all start to use more bins and be tidy kiwi's.
ReplyDeleteKeep working hard Vakasa. See you soon. Keep smiling:)
Bronca