I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Kasa, I really enjoyed reading your writing about your chosen NZ hero. I agree with you that Sir Edmund Hillary was truely a hero. He worked so hard in Nepal with the Sherpa's in making schools for kids who did not have schools to go to. He lost his wife and daughter in a plane crash yet he continued working hard and did not give up in life. Looking forward to seeing at school on Monday.
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Hi Kasa,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your writing about your chosen NZ hero. I agree with you that Sir Edmund Hillary was truely a hero. He worked so hard in Nepal with the Sherpa's in making schools for kids who did not have schools to go to.
He lost his wife and daughter in a plane crash yet he continued working hard and did not give up in life.
Looking forward to seeing at school on Monday.
Hi kasa I really like your writing task and I didn't have the time to read all of your writing and ka kite :)
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