I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Kasa, There is so many important points you have in your poster. I read it to my son Zameer as well and he said "Wow". Your next step is to work on saying in your work where you have got the information from? Keep learning and keep safe. Well done.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Kasa,
ReplyDeleteThere is so many important points you have in your poster. I read it to my son Zameer as well and he said "Wow". Your next step is to work on saying in your work where you have got the information from? Keep learning and keep safe. Well done.
hi mannpreet this kasa thank you for sharing my writting to other people i like doing it to show people that sickness is serious expressly cornavirus
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