I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Kasa, What a great start at writing your opinion and using paragraphs in your writing. It is a very important skill in Writing to be able to write your ideas in paragraphs and you have made a great start. Remember each paragraph should have 3 to 4 sentences in it at least. You have done a great job at making a start at using paragraphs.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Kasa,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great start at writing your opinion and using paragraphs in your writing. It is a very important skill in Writing to be able to write your ideas in paragraphs and you have made a great start. Remember each paragraph should have 3 to 4 sentences in it at least. You have done a great job at making a start at using paragraphs.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Kasa I really like your writing on covid-19 it was very interesting to read keep up the great work.
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