I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Vakasa your editing is really good and terrfic. I got a good feeling about this and it's really cool that you made this and the pictures of anzac is impressive. I hope you enjoy!
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Hi Vakasa your editing is really good and terrfic. I got a good feeling about this and it's really cool that you made this and the pictures of anzac is impressive. I hope you enjoy!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kasa I really love your picture it is very lovely and impressive keep up the hard work.
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